I'd REALLY appreciate it if you guys read my fan-fic

Martin1 · August 2011

http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=298510

I just need some feedback, positive or negative I really don't care. In fact, I'd welcome some negative feedback, the only way it could possibly get better.

This is basically half a war story and half a story about Dumbledore's time before facing Grindewald.

To anyone who takes the time to read it, thank you, I really do appreciate it!

Edit: I've updated with chapter 2

aaron · August 2011

I'm afraid I don't have time to read it tonight, but HOLY SHIT--

This graphic is terrific! I can't wait to start! And it seems like those two reviews are glowing. I'm excited.

Martin1 · August 2011

Haha, thanks! Making it wasn't difficult at all, just a quick fade between the two, but the idea for it took me a bit to think of

Festax0333 · August 2011

rocking banner

Twinkletoes · August 2011

Wow, is that the title on the banner? I can't wait to read it! I'll have to wait a couple of days until I can be on my laptop though. I'll review on the site under my account 'CornishPixie'.

Martin1 · August 2011

The first chapter is pretty good... I loved the first chapter in Half-Blood Prince, and this reminded me of it.

That's what I was aiming for

Martin1 · August 2011

Wow, is that the title on the banner? I can't wait to read it! I'll have to wait a couple of days until I can be on my laptop though. I'll review on the site under my account 'CornishPixie'.

Have you written anything? If so, I'd love to read it!

Twinkletoes · August 2011

Wow, is that the title on the banner? I can't wait to read it! I'll have to wait a couple of days until I can be on my laptop though. I'll review on the site under my account 'CornishPixie'.
Have you written anything? If so, I'd love to read it!

I have! Most of it's oldish. There are a couple of one shots I'm really proud of and my chaptered stories have been stagnating for a while...but you can check it out if you like. Just click on my name once I review.

Lord_Darkeyes · August 2011

I won't have time tonight, but I'll get on later tomorrow

Martin1 · August 2011

Man, you're a hell of a writer. Very descriptive. I like it so far.

Thank you

Marie_Anette · August 2011

I left the tab open so I can read it tomorrow!
I'm not usually into fan fiction but this looks interesting!

Martin1 · August 2011

Chapter 2 is up

Abhishek · August 2011

Read chapter 1. My word, you really seem to have a natural flair for this kind of a thing. It was ruddy brilliant !!!!!

Sorry but I am going to sleep so will only be able to read Chapter 2 tomorrow. Its 1230 in the morning here and I am tired. (:|

Martin1 · August 2011

Read chapter 1. My word, you really seem to have a natural flair for this kind of a thing. It was ruddy brilliant !!!!!
Sorry but I am going to sleep so will only be able to read Chapter 2 tomorrow. Its 1230 in the morning here and I am tired. (:|

Haha, understandable! But thank you, that means a lot

I'd REALLY appreciate it if you guys read my fan-fic

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