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Albus Severus and the Revenge of the Prince

Darth LedgerDarth Ledger Posts: 6,594 ✭✭✭✭✭
edited July 2011 in General
"What if I'm in Slytherin?"
"Albus Severus... You were named for 2 headmasters at Hogwarts. One of them was a slytherin, and he was perhaps the bravest man I ever knew."

This story picks up on the Hogwarts train, as we see Al Severus resenting the constant questions about his father from other first years. He doesn't talk alot, and would rather keep to himself.

"Albus Potter!"
Fear floods him as he walks up to take a seat, having the old beaten up Sorting Hat placed on his head.

"You are clouded with fear, and you harbor resentment for your father... there is great potential. But where to put you? SLYTHERIN!"

The sorting hat made the decision before Al could think otherwise... His father had lied... He didn't get a choice.

3 years later:

We enter Albus Potter's 4th year at Hogwarts, and we discover that he has greatly decreased his awareness, and only one person suspects the illicit activities he's been up to over the last few years.. Scorpio Malfoy has been hot on Al's trail, and knows he has been stealing books of the darkest art from the library.

Al Severus is called to the headmaster's office, only to find it empty. The headmaster usually didn't retire to his office until later. Albus had green eyes, like his father... And they quickly found something disturbing. A man with long black hair was looking out at him through a portrait.

"So you are Severus Snape? And you loved my grandmother?"

Snape has had contact in the heaven state with an old villain, turned good, and harbors a secret. Snape, though determined to bring down Voldemort, was never truly on Harry's side. And now he works to bring down Harry from within.

Snape had searched and found an old power source, once used in a galaxy far, far away. Snape feeds on Albus Severus, playing on the resentment he feels towards his father.

On Snape's orders, Al Severus goes to the long since forgotten Room of Requirement. He starts to use his feelings, and searches himself. He is guided to a box. In this box he finds an old black wand, most famous for killing Albus Dumbledore. Alongside it, a metal device with a red button on the side. It looks highly advanced.

Al Severus picks both items up and presses the red button, revealing a concentrated beam of Red Light... Like a sword, or a saber. A light saber.

Al Severus immediately goes to the Headmaster's office and steals the Portrait of Snape. Upon his guidance, Albus Severus kills several teachers that night, leaving a clear path for his destruction.

Snape gives him a new name.. One all will fear.

Darth Severus, fulfill your destiny.

HARRY POTTER:

Recieves a patronus from Neville right before Neville is stuck down by a magic he knows nothing of, a red light that cut straight through him. Harry is devastated by what his son is doing. Suddenly, Scorpio Malfoy appears in his house, along with Harry's oldest son by apparation.

"I've been tracking him... He has, now, gone over to the Dark Side."

Thinking quickly, Harry takes Scorpio to hogsmeade.

While Darth Severus is wreaking havoc in Hogwarts, Harry Potter is doing what he never thought he would do... Breaking into Dumbledore's Tomb.

Ironically, Scorpio must be the true owner... He can bring down my youngest son.

Harry takes the elder wand, and allows Scorpio to disarm him.

Scorpio takes the wand that will now do his full bidding, and sets off towards Hogwarts.

The book ends with Scorpio and Darth Severus having one of the most epic duals in history across Hogwarts, ending what could have been a greater story...

Sadly I have to be at school in 20 minutes and can't type more... But this is a 300 page book I'm working on. I hope you guys found it interesting.
"If you make yourself more than just a man... If you devote yourself to an ideal... You become something else entirely- A Legend."

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  • Festax0333Festax0333 Posts: 11,753 ✭✭✭✭✭
  • NickNick Posts: 20,653 ✭✭✭✭✭
    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-))
  • JoshieJoshie Posts: 4,762 ✭✭✭✭✭
    It's a mix of Star Wars and Harry Potter, duh.
  • Darth LedgerDarth Ledger Posts: 6,594 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I actually have a long drawn out story behind my username... All there is to it.
    "If you make yourself more than just a man... If you devote yourself to an ideal... You become something else entirely- A Legend."

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  • aaronaaron Posts: 20,950 mod
    That's pretty epic.
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  • "What if I'm in Slytherin?"
    "Albus Severus... You were named for 2 headmasters at Hogwarts. One of them was a slytherin, and he was perhaps the bravest man I ever knew."

    This story picks up on the Hogwarts train, as we see Al Severus resenting the constant questions about his father from other first years. He doesn't talk alot, and would rather keep to himself.

    "Albus Potter!"
    Fear floods him as he walks up to take a seat, having the old beaten up Sorting Hat placed on his head.

    "You are clouded with fear, and you harbor resentment for your father... there is great potential. But where to put you? SLYTHERIN!"

    The sorting hat made the decision before Al could think otherwise... His father had lied... He didn't get a choice.

    3 years later:

    We enter Albus Potter's 4th year at Hogwarts, and we discover that he has greatly decreased his awareness, and only one person suspects the illicit activities he's been up to over the last few years.. Scorpio Malfoy has been hot on Al's trail, and knows he has been stealing books of the darkest art from the library.

    Al Severus is called to the headmaster's office, only to find it empty. The headmaster usually didn't retire to his office until later. Albus had green eyes, like his father... And they quickly found something disturbing. A man with long black hair was looking out at him through a portrait.

    "So you are Severus Snape? And you loved my grandmother?"

    Snape has had contact in the heaven state with an old villain, turned good, and harbors a secret. Snape, though determined to bring down Voldemort, was never truly on Harry's side. And now he works to bring down Harry from within.

    Snape had searched and found an old power source, once used in a galaxy far, far away. Snape feeds on Albus Severus, playing on the resentment he feels towards his father.

    On Snape's orders, Al Severus goes to the long since forgotten Room of Requirement. He starts to use his feelings, and searches himself. He is guided to a box. In this box he finds an old black wand, most famous for killing Albus Dumbledore. Alongside it, a metal device with a red button on the side. It looks highly advanced.

    Al Severus picks both items up and presses the red button, revealing a concentrated beam of Red Light... Like a sword, or a saber. A light saber.

    Al Severus immediately goes to the Headmaster's office and steals the Portrait of Snape. Upon his guidance, Albus Severus kills several teachers that night, leaving a clear path for his destruction.

    Snape gives him a new name.. One all will fear.

    Darth Severus, fulfill your destiny.

    HARRY POTTER:

    Recieves a patronus from Neville right before Neville is stuck down by a magic he knows nothing of, a red light that cut straight through him. Harry is devastated by what his son is doing. Suddenly, Scorpio Malfoy appears in his house, along with Harry's oldest son by apparation.

    "I've been tracking him... He has, now, gone over to the Dark Side."

    Thinking quickly, Harry takes Scorpio to hogsmeade.

    While Darth Severus is wreaking havoc in Hogwarts, Harry Potter is doing what he never thought he would do... Breaking into Dumbledore's Tomb.

    Ironically, Scorpio must be the true owner... He can bring down my youngest son.

    Harry takes the elder wand, and allows Scorpio to disarm him.

    Scorpio takes the wand that will now do his full bidding, and sets off towards Hogwarts.

    The book ends with Scorpio and Darth Severus having one of the most epic duals in history across Hogwarts, ending what could have been a greater story...

    Sadly I have to be at school in 20 minutes and can't type more... But this is a 300 page book I'm working on. I hope you guys found it interesting.


  • Festax0333Festax0333 Posts: 11,753 ✭✭✭✭✭
    "What if I'm in Slytherin?"
    "Albus Severus... You were named for 2 headmasters at Hogwarts. One of them was a slytherin, and he was perhaps the bravest man I ever knew."

    This story picks up on the Hogwarts train, as we see Al Severus resenting the constant questions about his father from other first years. He doesn't talk alot, and would rather keep to himself.

    "Albus Potter!"
    Fear floods him as he walks up to take a seat, having the old beaten up Sorting Hat placed on his head.

    "You are clouded with fear, and you harbor resentment for your father... there is great potential. But where to put you? SLYTHERIN!"

    The sorting hat made the decision before Al could think otherwise... His father had lied... He didn't get a choice.

    3 years later:

    We enter Albus Potter's 4th year at Hogwarts, and we discover that he has greatly decreased his awareness, and only one person suspects the illicit activities he's been up to over the last few years.. Scorpio Malfoy has been hot on Al's trail, and knows he has been stealing books of the darkest art from the library.

    Al Severus is called to the headmaster's office, only to find it empty. The headmaster usually didn't retire to his office until later. Albus had green eyes, like his father... And they quickly found something disturbing. A man with long black hair was looking out at him through a portrait.

    "So you are Severus Snape? And you loved my grandmother?"

    Snape has had contact in the heaven state with an old villain, turned good, and harbors a secret. Snape, though determined to bring down Voldemort, was never truly on Harry's side. And now he works to bring down Harry from within.

    Snape had searched and found an old power source, once used in a galaxy far, far away. Snape feeds on Albus Severus, playing on the resentment he feels towards his father.

    On Snape's orders, Al Severus goes to the long since forgotten Room of Requirement. He starts to use his feelings, and searches himself. He is guided to a box. In this box he finds an old black wand, most famous for killing Albus Dumbledore. Alongside it, a metal device with a red button on the side. It looks highly advanced.

    Al Severus picks both items up and presses the red button, revealing a concentrated beam of Red Light... Like a sword, or a saber. A light saber.

    Al Severus immediately goes to the Headmaster's office and steals the Portrait of Snape. Upon his guidance, Albus Severus kills several teachers that night, leaving a clear path for his destruction.

    Snape gives him a new name.. One all will fear.

    Darth Severus, fulfill your destiny.

    HARRY POTTER:

    Recieves a patronus from Neville right before Neville is stuck down by a magic he knows nothing of, a red light that cut straight through him. Harry is devastated by what his son is doing. Suddenly, Scorpio Malfoy appears in his house, along with Harry's oldest son by apparation.

    "I've been tracking him... He has, now, gone over to the Dark Side."

    Thinking quickly, Harry takes Scorpio to hogsmeade.

    While Darth Severus is wreaking havoc in Hogwarts, Harry Potter is doing what he never thought he would do... Breaking into Dumbledore's Tomb.

    Ironically, Scorpio must be the true owner... He can bring down my youngest son.

    Harry takes the elder wand, and allows Scorpio to disarm him.

    Scorpio takes the wand that will now do his full bidding, and sets off towards Hogwarts.

    The book ends with Scorpio and Darth Severus having one of the most epic duals in history across Hogwarts, ending what could have been a greater story...

    Sadly I have to be at school in 20 minutes and can't type more... But this is a 300 page book I'm working on. I hope you guys found it interesting.




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  • marques18marques18 Posts: 334 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
    lmao. I actually liked it up until the light saber part.
    I agree with this.. The first part is actually good! But the star wars mix? Don't get me wrong I love all of those movies, but I think, and this is only my opinion, that something that could have been very, very good was kinda ruined...
    Pottermore - ThestralStorm79



  • NickNick Posts: 20,653 ✭✭✭✭✭
  • Darth LedgerDarth Ledger Posts: 6,594 ✭✭✭✭✭
    lmao. I actually liked it up until the light saber part. Still funny though.
    In the full version Scorpio actually finds Luke's old green lightsaber... There's also a girl that Scorpio dates that Darth loved, just adding on to everything else that started his descent into the dark side.
    "If you make yourself more than just a man... If you devote yourself to an ideal... You become something else entirely- A Legend."

    image

  • aaronaaron Posts: 20,950 mod
    You know Draco's son is named Scorpius, not Scorpio, right?
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  • Darth LedgerDarth Ledger Posts: 6,594 ✭✭✭✭✭
    You know Draco's son is named Scorpius, not Scorpio, right?
    b-(
    "If you make yourself more than just a man... If you devote yourself to an ideal... You become something else entirely- A Legend."

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