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A Harry Potter Fan-Fic (spoilers for book seven and probably more)

Rachae PotterRachae Potter Posts: 35
edited July 2010 in Books
My user name is pronounced Ra-shae
I wanted to make a Harry Potter Fan-Fic so hear it goes
The first chapter takes place 2 years after the epilogue in book seven
by the way, I have no Idea what color of eyes Ginny has. So if someone could tell me?

Chapter 1
A beautiful woman sat in a hospital bed gazing fondly at her new daughter. The woman had dazzling orange hair and the baby had jet black, but they had the same eyes.
A tall man burst though the door, "Ginny!" He exclaimed with joy, "she's beautiful," he said as he walked toward the bed,"What should we name her?"
"I was hoping you could help me with that Harry" Ginny laughed as her husband sat down on the edge of the bed. "but I would like to name her something unique," She said," All of our other children have been named after some one, James Albus, and Lilly. Not that there's anything wrong with that!" Ginny added at the slight look of hurt on Harry's face,"All of those were fine people, but I want her to have an interesting name."
"Thats fine," Harry said, "did you have anything in mind?"
Ginny smiled,"Well, I was thinking Rachae, spelled like Rachael but without an 'l' at the end," Ginny sugested, "It just seemed, interesting"
"Then Rachae it is!" Harry announced. Ginny laughed and then the door opened again and there stood two boys and a girl.
"Can we come in?" the girl asked, looking anxious.
Ginny smiled at her other three children,"Well of course,Lily," she said and they walked thorough the doorway and went to look at their little sister.
"She's adorable!" Lily gasped when saw her,"Have you named her?" she asked,looking up at her parents.
"Almost," Harry said, "your Mother came up with Rachae, is that alright with you?"
"Sure" the boys chorused, then James teased,"looks just like you when you were born Albus"
"Does not!" Albus said, angry,"She's a girl"
"Exactly," James laughed.
Ginny looked exasperated,"Really boys, do you have to?"
The boys looked embarrassed,"No" they muttered and then fell silent.
Lily laughed and then said,"I like the name"
"Ok then," Ginny said," Its settled"

Comments

  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    good job
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    Glad youre here Rachae;)
    R:,)
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    yea
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    Double yeah....
    R:,)
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    oh no not this again
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    I KNEW youd say that i couldve bet my life lolooollo!!!!!!
    R:,)
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    lolol im predictable
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    U are,cuz u said that last time....
    R:,)
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    yea im predictable....lolol
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    I knew youd say that twice cuz sometimes u reapeat yourself lol!! Well till tomorow!!!!
    R:,)
  • lol, Thanks you guys.

    Chapter 2,
    Rachae woke up and excitement ran though her. Today was her 11th Birthday!She would be old enough to go to Hogwarts! She had been waiting for this moment for what seemed like forever. When she was born all her siblings were already in Hogwarts and she had been left at home with only her mother every school year. Of course all of her siblings were already out of school. Lily had graduated a few years ago, and she was the youngest besides Rachae. It had been nice when James graduated, then she and her mother had company, but once every one was out of school and Rachae still hadn't gone she felt left out and the house felt crowded. But now she was finally able to go!
    "Rachae!" Ginny called, "Come down for Breakfast!"
    Rachae got up and rushed downstairs to find that the table was stacked high with presents, and that James, Albus, and her father had taken the day off of work to celebrate her birthday. "Wow! Thank you guys so much!"She exclaimed.
    "Don't thank us just yet," Lily said,"you haven't even opened your presents!"
    Just then the door opened and Ginny walked in carrying a beautiful birthday cake, it was shape like a giant number 11 with a small candy model of Hogwarts on top."WOW" Rachae said again.
    "What do you say?" Ginny asked Rachae, "Cake or presents first?"
    Rachae smiled,"Presents!" She said


    I will continue this chapter later, and I want some critique please.
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    Lol!! I love these chapters theyre interseting;););) well done!!!!
    R:,)
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    good job
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    I hope someone dies in the next chapter lol!!!
    R:,)))
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    thats terrible!!!!
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    i hope we see some duels in this fanfic
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    Lol yeah....surprise us Rache!!!!!
    R:,)))
  • I'll try.
    You guys are funny.
  • I was trying to write, but I have writers block, so maybe later.
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    Ok;)
    R:,)
  • NickNick Posts: 20,654 ✭✭✭✭✭
    okey dokey
  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    I love wen u say hokey dokey IDK y....
    R:,)
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